Character Spotlight – Jafar

In chapter 5, we are introduced to one of the primary antagonist in the story named JAFAR.

In the character page, he is described as a wealthy businessman. He also runs Jafar’s Corner – the hottest blog in country. While the other popular local blog have become more mainstream (deals with food, photography, movie reviews and covering social events), Jafar aggressively decided to take his blog to another direction by relishing on juicy gossips, rumours and hot button issues. This garnered him many fans as well as haters.

Before Bilantapura became the main supervillain of the story, Jafar was originally conceived as the primary antagonist of the story.

The inspiration came from a story I heard back then around 2007 and 2008. The story was that a security guard found a family hiking up a hill in Tutong with all their belongings in the early dawn of the day. The security guard asked them what are they doing and the father replied that they received an SMS that warned them that a Tsunami is coming and they are saving themselves. Of course, the SMS is one of those bullshit messages we all get every year (eg. like how many times did we get that bullshit ‘gelombang merosakkan telipun pada pukul 10 malam’ messages on our phones?).

Then I wondered, “That is just one family. Imagine if the rumours were more elaborate and manages to fool the whole of Brunei? That would’ve been even worse” Remember that this was in 2008 and before all these ‘Fake News’ on mainstream media. That’s when I conceived the character I called BIG BOSS – a figure that can manipulate the media to fool a lot of people for his own needs. That would be a perfect antagonist to the Brunei Superhero!

When I explain the concept of the antagonist to a friend, I described him as “Imagine if Ranoadidas has an evil twin?”

In 2011, a friend decided to share rough sketch he did of how he the character may look like when I explained the character to him.

I eventually named him JAFAR after the villain in Aladdin because…well, why not Hahaha

His character evolved from a straight up villain to more of an opportunist and an egotistical character. The fact that he’s currently playing both sides (helping Kapten Brunei while also secretly involve in some criminal activities) makes him an interesting character and opens a lot of possibilities.

Jafar will surely continue to play a prominent role in the story.

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Set in a fictional / alternate version of Brunei, GUARDIANS OF DARUSSALAM is a story of an ordinary boy named ADAM who gained super strength after an encounter with a magical giant archer fish – just like the legend of Brunei’s mythical hero, Awang Semaun. Initially reluctant, Adam soon finds the hero within him and set out to become a superhero for Brunei.

When dark forces rises and threatens the peace in Brunei, it is up to Adam and his allies to stop it and uphold the country as a DARUSSALAM – an Abode of Peace.

You can read the chapters of Guardians of Darussalam: A Brunei Superhero Story HERE.

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Brunei Supehero Story returns with new chapter – TAHUN SATU – PART 2 & 3

The Brunei Superhero Story is back with a new story arc – TAHUN SATU

The latest three chapters make up a story arc titled “Tahun Satu” – a nice little nod to the famous Batman origin arc ‘Year One’.

While the first four chapters were origin stories, the latest three chapters are about expanding this fictional world. So you’ll get a taste of wide range of characters that inhabit this fictional world from journalists, the cops, the criminals, etc. To me, it makes the setting more rich and believable.

Although you will get an idea of the endgame of the story (the inevitable final battle between good and evil), there are enough characters and backstories that have been hinted or set up throughout which may or may not be used to fill up future chapters. I guess you can see the 7 chapters as a TV series pilot.

I’ll delve deeper into some of the specific new characters and themes introduced in this story arc in future posts.

In the meantime, happy reading!

ORIGINS Story Arc

CHAPTER 1

ORIGINS part 1 – Adam encounters a magical giant archer fish that granted him extraordinary strength – the same ability as the legendary Bruneian folk hero Awang Semaun.

CHAPTER 2

ORIGINS part 2 – Liza helps a victim of an abusive relationship. Adam struggles with his newfound strength and gets involved in a car accident.

CHAPTER 3

ORIGINS part 3 – Ridzuan returns to Brunei from overseas and set out his own investigation on criminals. Meanwhile, Ali tries to convince Adam to use his superpowers to help others.

CHAPTER 4

ORIGINS part 4 – As a new type of drugs begin to seep into the black market, Adam and Ridzuan makes their debut as costumed ‘superheroes’: ‘Kapten Brunei’ and ‘Balau Man’

TAHUN SATU Story Arc

CHAPTER 5

TAHUN SATU part 1 – Kapten Brunei and Balau Man meet for the first time as their fight against the drug dealers continue. Meanwhile, the local newspaper gets a warning from the police commissioner on its reporting of masked vigilantes

CHAPTER 6

TAHUN SATU part 2 – Kapten Brunei makes its public debut. Ridzuan and Akmal gets into a heated argument on the role of masked heroes.

CHAPTER 7

TAHUN SATU part 3 – Dangerous gang members take over The Daily Brunei office and it is up to Kapten Brunei to save the day.

Chapter 5 – Tahun Satu part 1

After a 4 months hiatus (aka Life happened), I am back with a new chapter!!

It’s also the start of a new act/volume in the Brunei Superhero saga. We got through the Origin part of the main characters and now we’re going to the meat of the story where some of the main themes and plot threads that I’ve always wanted to tackle in this Brunei superhero story begins to unravel itself. I’ll talk more about this as the story progresses.

The first story arc (divided in three parts) is titled ‘TAHUN SATU’ which is malay for ‘Year One’ – an obvious nod to the famous Batman origin comic, Batman Year One. It’s basically going to be Captain Brunei and Balau Man’s first year of superheroic. The main goal of this story arc is to introduce this fictional world that our characters are living in. We get introduced to lots of characters from different spheres of influence of the country – the media, the bloggers, the police, the government, the criminals, etc. You get to see how the emergence of local superheroes affected the rest of the society.

Again, I will talk more about this later once the other two parts of this story arc gets published (in the next few days). In the meantime, enjoy the first part below:

CHAPTER 5: TAHUN SATU part 1

History of Captain Brunei and the Brunei Superhero Story

So how did the idea for this superhero story started?

Let’s rewind the clocks back to 2010.

The Beginning – 2010

‘Guardians of Darussalam’ is a Brunei Superhero Story. The center of this story is a superhero named “Kapten Brunei” or “Captain Brunei”

I’m not gonna pretend that I was the first one to toy with the concept of ‘Captain Brunei’. There are many fan artworks of ‘Captain Brunei’ out there if you bother to search them.

But what I can tell you that for me, I had the idea back in 2010. I saw ‘Black Panther’ in an ‘Avengers’ cartoon and thought, “Hmmm there’s a black superhero so how about an Asian superhero? No wait, how about a local superhero (from my country Brunei) ?!!”

So I took Captain America’s basic design and modified it with our flag colours. And I also made a Shield just like Cap America.

Originally, I used Yellow but then I thought it would look cooler if I used a more Orange-ish/Gold-ish colour. I don’t know about you but the costume and the shield have that classic Pelita Brunei feel to it

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It was decided from very early on that his powers would be super strength ala local folklore hero (the Brunei Hercules) Awang Semaun.

Mashing up the backstories of my favourite superheroes Spiderman, Superman and Batman, I came up with a story:

He was an ordinary Bruneian living an ordinary life. One day, while he was fishing, he caught a mysterious Ikan Sumpit-Sumpit (Archer Fish) and ate it. Just like the legend of Awang Semaun, he gained super strength ability. He decided to become a superhero to fight crime and help the weak. However, his newfound fame got into his head which made him arrogant and snobbish (Ambung dan kebesaran). He may have found more fans but he lost sight of the ones that matters more; his family and close friends.

Now faced with a powerful and deadly cunning enemy that intends to use his arrogance against him, our Bruneian superhero must get back to his senses and listen to the wise words of his late father (who was a fisherman and taught him how to fish among other things) in order to truly become the great hero he was meant to be.

Web Comic – 2011

A year later, a friend of mine liked my concept of ‘Captain Brunei’. Back then, he was running a local Bruneian webcomic site called ‘Alpha Jaipan’. He asked me if he can adapt the concept into his webcomic character and I didn’t have a problem with that.

And so he made this:

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He made two more Captain Brunei webcomic here and here.

Not long, my friend told me his intention to ‘reboot’ the Captain Brunei idea and asked me whether I have some ideas.

Fortunately, I was coming up with another storyline for Captain Brunei and ideas for various characters started springing up in my mind.

The deal seemed simple enough. I write the story, he draws the comic.

Constructing the story – 2011

I sent him my idea for the Captain Brunei character:

At a quiet part of Brunei lives ADAM, a Bruneian in his 20ish who lives with his Mom. His father passed away few years ago (Similar to Peter Parker/Spiderman) He’s not skinny nor big.
He’s not nerdy nor socially awkward. He’s a good and kind kid who’s not badly influenced by the ‘Bandar kids’.

One day, while he was fishing, he caught a mysterious Ikan Sumpit-Sumpit (Archer Fish) and ate it. Just like the legend of Awang Semaun, he gained super strength ability.

I also came up with the concept of the ‘Sidekick’ character which later became ‘Ali’:

He was reluctant to use his superpowers and wanted to hide it/keep it secret from others. One day he saved ‘SIDEKICK’ from a car accident. the SIDEKICK saw he has super strenght and believed that ADAM should start to become a superhero and save others.

SIDEKICK is a comic/movie geek. And he becomes ADAM’s advisor/partner/’manager’

SIDEKICK began to promote ADAM as a superhero. Had someone design his costume CAPTAIN BRUNEI/BRUNEI MAN

– costume intentional rip off of Captain America costume – lack of originality and SIDEKICK being a fan of comics

My friend suggested that Captain Brunei should have a love interest.

So I originally came up with a love triangle arc between Adam’s ‘kampung girl’ childhood friend (who later became the character ‘Aisyah’) and the more ‘Bandar girl’ character I nicknamed ‘Party Girl’ at that time – come from a wealthy family, feisty, independent, sporty and a journalist (or a fashion designer…I actually couldn’t decide back then). My friend managed to sketch her – “a little princess with many faces” was how he described her.

Concept the wild girl

‘Party Girl’ does not appear in current story. Instead, her character is mainly divided into two characters: Ridzuan (Balau Man) and Liza ( Dayang Dynamite).

But as you know….’Life’ happens and we both went on to do our own thing and busy with other things going on our lives.

Actual Writing – 2012

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I graduated with my Masters in 2012. Jobless and lots of free time, I went back thinking about the Captain Brunei idea and got more ambitious with the story by coming up with more superheroes. One day I said to myself, “why don’t I just go ahead and take a crack at actually writing them.” You’ll never know if it is truly a ‘cool idea’ until you go ahead and write them.

So write I did.

Between October 2012 to April 2013, I published 9 chapters online with an inconsistent schedule.

I got a job in May 2013 and I took a break from writing. I managed to publish 3 more chapters online a year later in July 2014 that acts as a ‘semi-ending’ to the story. I left it  in a cliffhanger with a hope that I’ll return to it someday.

The Return – 2017

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And return I did but I wasn’t going to straight up continue where I left off.

Instead, I went back to the beginning and plan on re-editing, re-tooling and re-publishing all the 12 chapters I wrote and hopefully it leads up to a NEW GRAND FINALE by the end of this year.

This time I’ll try to publish in a scheduled manner (or at least try harder to) and not shy away from sharing them to everyone. The ‘mistake’ I did last time was I shared it to a few and rely on them to share it with others and then put my hope on ‘word of mouth’. But that doesn’t happen HAHA (unless I’m a ‘somebody’ which I’m not).

So there you have it…the short history of Captain Brunei and Guardians of Darussalam.

In the meantime, go check out the Chapters released so far. I’ll try to publish them once every two weeks (so the next one will be on 19 February. Insya’allah)

Hope you enjoy it so far!

New Chapter – Chapter 4 – Captain Brunei and Balau Man

The Brunei Superhero story continues…

Chapter 4 – Ali

As a new type of drugs begin to seep into the black market, Adam and Ridzuan makes their debut as costumed heroes.

This new chapter also marks the end of Volume I of the story which is the basically the Origin story of the main characters.

You can read the latest Chapter HERE.

I’m open to any comments or suggestions.

When you’re done reading, you can head off to the commentary below.

CHAPTER 4 COMMENTARY

OK, first things first, we FINALLY get to the point where these characters suit up and adopt their superhero moniker. You have:

  1. Adam as Captain Brunei, obviously inspired by Marvel’s Captain America.
  2. Ridzuan as Balau Man, the ‘Batman’ of the story.
  3. Liza takes her social media username, Dayang Dynamite and starting to turn it into a brand. Although she has yet to don a superhero costume, I can safely say that she will eventually.

CAPTAIN BRUNEI or KAPTEN BRUNEI

I’m not gonna pretend that I was the first one to toy with the concept of ‘Captain Brunei’. There are many fan artworks of ‘Captain Brunei’ out there if you bother to search them. But what I can tell you that for me, I had the idea back in 2010  (you can find my original Tumblr post HERE). I’ll write more about the history/evolution of my version of Captain Brunei in a future post.

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Despite the name, Adam’s story owes more to Spiderman and Superman than Captain America.

BALAU MAN

In this chapter, Ridzuan finally suit up as the Batman-esque superhero, Balau Man based on ‘Hantu Balau’, a demonic all black entity. He is described looking like a cross between The Predator and Marvel’s Blackheart (with armor and eskrima sticks). I’m not much of an artist so I’ll just leave you with these two images and you can use your imagination Hahaha

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Why Balau Man? Simply because Balau and Bat both starts with the letter B. And also as an excuse for me to make a tribute to the wonderful Catatan Misteri.

In 2000, RTB aired this horror series called Catatan Misteri. I wouldn’t say it was high quality production but they made it up with an enjoyable plot. It was an anthology series with each episode telling different horror story (that are most likely to be  based on true story). The series has a sort of a cult following for a generation of Bruneians and like many others, I want to see the full episodes released on DVD or online.

One of the more memorable episode was the first one involving a demonic entity known as ‘Balau’ or ‘Hantu Balau’ that haunted this family who just moved into their new house. I’ve never heard of ‘Hantu Balau’ before and it seems that the term never had any previous basis. I guess Catatan Misteri did contribute a new terminology into our everyday language!

DAYANG DYNAMITE

I wanted the female superhero to have the word ‘Dayang’ on her name. In a spirit of the alliteration in ‘Wonder Woman’, I decided on ‘Dayang Dynamite’. Liza has yet to suit up as a superhero in this chapter but she will in the next volume. She will play a bigger role especially in this particular future story arc.

Again, you can read the latest Chapter HERE

I’m open to any comments or suggestions.

Enjoy!

Chapter 3 – Ridzuan

The Brunei Superhero story continues….

Ridzuan returns to Brunei from overseas and set out his own investigation on criminals. Meanwhile, Ali tries to convince Adam to use his superpowers to help others.

You can read Chapter 3  HERE

The ‘Bruce Wayne’ of the story

The main highlight of this chapter is the introduction of Ridzuan who is obviously the ‘Bruce Wayne’ of the story – the billionaire turned superhero vigilante – thus completing this story’s version of the DC trinity (Adam is the ‘Clark Kent’ and Liza is the ‘Diana Prince’ of the story).

But of course, Ridzuan is not exactly like the brooding and capable man as Bruce Wayne. Ridzuan is a little bit more of thrill seeker and a naive idealist who thinks he can help by working outside the law or the system. To me, he represents those young freshly graduated idealistic Bruneians who returns to from overseas and thinks he can make a difference.

The ‘Nightrunner’ connection

In the chapter, there are references to Ridzuan idolizing a French vigilante/hero named Nightrunner. The idea is that Ridzuan encountered this figure while living in Paris and inspired him to take up parkour as well as becoming a masked hero.

There is actually a character called Nightrunner in the comics. Introduced in 2011, Nightrunner was a French-Algerian superhero who later got recruited by Batman to be his representative in Paris.

Bilal is a student from the Paris commune of Clichy-Sous-Bois, a neighborhood rife with conflict due to racial tensions. Bilal refused to take sides in the conflict, until one day he and his best friend Aarif were caught in the crossfire. Later that day, Aarif, obsessed with taking the law into his own hands, set fire to a police station, dying in the process. To honor the memory of his friend, Bilal began his training in Parkour and became the vigilante known as Nightrunner to prevent chaos and civil war in his city.

The ‘Nightrunner’ being referenced in this story may or may not be the same Nightrunner in the Batman comics. It’s just a cool little easter egg/nod to this comic book character.

The Return of the Brunei Superhero Story

Back in 2012, I started writing a Brunei superhero story titled ‘Guardians of Darussalam’ and published it online.

I’ve published several chapters sporadically between 2012 and 2014 in my spare time. I stopped because of several reasons (writer’s block, lost of interest, day job workload, etc). I said that I’ll return to it someday.

It has been three years and now I am re-editing and re-publishing the chapters I’ve written back then.

I am hoping to re-publish the chapters every week (one chapter per week).

I’m open to any constructive comments/suggestions.

Hope you all enjoy!

Click the links below to the read the chapters so far:

CHAPTER 1
6 Jan 2017
Adam encounters a magical giant archer fish that granted him extraordinary strength – the same ability as the legendary Bruneian folk hero Awang Semaun.

CHAPTER 2
15 Jan 2017
Liza helps a victim of physical abuse. Adam gets involved in a car accident.